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Critique classmates assignment

  • Writer: ANYELIN SOLIS
    ANYELIN SOLIS
  • Mar 28, 2023
  • 2 min read

1.I like the transitions this person added. I think this person was trying to go for a gaming theme according to the music chosen. But I did not see a storyline.


2. I like the way this person organized and added text to help understand what's going on. I like the way this person made it different by adding rounds. But i did not see all the animations.


3.I like the way this person added sound effects to every animation and made them match with it. This person really dedicated time to the sound effects. But the sound effects for some parts of the animations were off.

4. I don't like the way this person did the animation. this person did have a storyline but they did not add sound effects. This person did not use all of the animations.


5. I really like the way this person did their storyline. I also like the music choice they added. But it was unfinished they didn't put any sound effects or music towards the last animations.


6. This person didn't add a storyline but this person did have sound effects. This person didn't add music. I also think the subtitles were a little to fast.


7. I like the way this person did their storyline. I think the storyline was on point. I also really like the way they added music and sound effects for the animations.


8. I don't really find this storyline interesting it kind of bored me. This person did add sound effects to the animations. The song choice kind of sounds tropical.


9. I like this one a lot. I like the way this person did it different from others by making it seem like a horror movie. I like how intense it was and the sound effects.


10. I dont like this one I dont really see a storyline on it. I dont really understand it either. I dont like the way the animations were mixed.


  1. The sound effects for these animations were good. This person didn't cut off the pause screen for one of the animations. I think they could've added subtitles and music to the background.

12. I like that this person added subtitles and sound effects but they could'e added music to the background. This person does have a storyline but I didn't really find it interesting. I think they could've added voices to the background .


13. I think this person did ok on their storyline. I like the background music. I also liked the sound effects added.

 
 
 

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